Story Nerd
For novelists, memoirists and screenwriters who want to know how stories work so they can finish their manuscripts faster, and without frustration. Each week literary editors Valerie Francis and Melanie Hill explain the craft of storytelling using films as examples. The goal is simple: to learn from writers who have come before us...what worked well and what didn't work so well. If you want to spend more time writing your book/screenplay and less time studying story theory, this podcast is for you. "The only thing that matters, and that ever will matter, is the story. That's it."...
What Went Right: Juror #2
If you're writing a quiet, character-driven story â especially if it deals with questions of morality â Juror #2 is a film you must watch. The storytelling craft is rock solid, and although it's a legal drama, it's also highly nuanced with complex characters and an unbelievably intriguing plot. There's no spectacle here. It's all substance. Check out this hook: What if a juror in a murder trial realized that he is the killer? -V.
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What Went Wrong: Ghosted
If you are wondering what kids mean when they say, âItâs cringeâ then watch this movie. Otherwise save yourself some time. On paper everything about this movie should work, but, and itâs an enormous but, it doesnât. Itâs easy to identify why. This movie doesnât know what it wants to be when it grows up - is it a romance, a spy or an action movie. On the upside, if you listen to this episode you will learn the difference between action stories and spy stories - I have very strong opinions about this. We also have l...
Our Best Advice: core event + progressive complictions
We've reached the end of another season and that means it's time for me and Melanie to give your our best advice, our a-has, and our key takeaways all about the core event and progressive complications. You'll want to bookmark this episode! -V.
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Women Talking: does what it says on the tin
Weâve had a number of masterful movies this season and Women Talking is another one. Q: How do you tell a story when everything youâve ever known is at stake? A: Consider the pros and cons using multiple protagonists. This is a great movie where the level of writing craft is high, and the core event provides more relief than you thought possible. If you can bear to watch this movie more than once, it will be worth it. -M.
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Best Exotic Marigold Hotel: secrets of multi POV stories
This movie looks like an innocent little story about seniors who want to make the most of their golden years, but the craft behind it will knock your socks off. It's a multiple POV, multiple plot film and believe me, this is NOT an easy format to pull off. So if you're writing a story with more than one protagonist and/or more than one plot line, do yourself a favour â listen to this episode and learn from these master storytellers. -V.
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Anatomy of a Fall: mind blown
Every-now-and-then we stumble across unassuming movies that blow our socks off. Anatomy of a Fall is one of these. Thereâs so much to love about this movie which is a masterclass in character, mystery, tension, and nearly every story telling principle weâve discussed on the podcast. Of course, thereâs a great deal to learn about progressive complications and the climatic moment. -M
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Shirley: when endings fail
I think the filmmakers had good intentions when they made SHIRLEY, unfortunately, they failed to stick to the essentials of storytelling. In this episode, Melanie does a fantastic job of illustrating what happens to a story when writers fail to create obstacles that progressively complicate the plot. (Progressive Complications are a big deal - you're going to want to pay attention to this one.) And I do a deep dive into the core event (aka the climax) and explain why it doesn't work and how you can avoid making the same mistake in your novel. -V.
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Mother's Instinct: keeps you guessing
The antagonist owned the progressive complications in this movie. Celine shows her best friend Alice what a fate worse than death could be. Valerie explains how the Core Event is linked to its genre and why itâs important to understand the difference between the core event in an action, horror, or thriller. -M
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Greenbook: when society is the antagonist
If you're writing a character-driven story, or a story where society is the antagonist, or a story with broad societal issues, add Greenbook to your list of films to study. I know all about the controversy surrounding this film but our analysis this week is, as always, on the storytelling craft. And from a craft perspective, this movie does a whole lot of things right. - V.
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Anyone But You: yeah nah
First of all I have to let you know that itâs a miracle that no podcasters were harmed during the making of this episode.
Bloody hell! What have I done? The cringe factor in this movie is off the charts - itâs worse than getting âsand up your clackerâ (if youâve watched this movie, youâll get the reference). However, the opening scene does provide a reasonable example of progressive complications in action. Not surprisingly, Valerieâs study of the Core Event is hampered by, um, by, everything. -M
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The Bank of Dave: def leppard steals the show
It's a brand new season and that means two brand new story theory principles to discuss! This time around, I'm studying the core event (aka a story's climax) and Melanie is studying progressive complications. The writers of THE BANK OF DAVE definitely poured some sugar on this genuinely sweet, feel-good movie. It's rock solid. As an added bonus, it also features Def Leppard (seriously!). Let me know if you literally stand up and dance at the end of this movie. I did! -V.
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Becoming a Bestselling Author, with Brian Proctor
In this special bonus episode, I interview Brian Proctor, a bestselling author in the field of personal development. This might seem like an odd fit for the show until you realize that it's not our talent or ability that holds us back as writers, it's our mindset. In this interview we discuss  how to conquer procrastination, the truth about manifesting, and the mindset Brian used to become a bestselling author with his very first book. -V.
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Pretty Woman: a masterclass in the fundamentals (archive)
While Melanie and I continue to beaver away in the background, we thought we'd pull PRETTY WOMAN from the archives for you. This movie is a fan favourite and here's the thing, it gets all the storytelling fundamentals exactly right. We can't wait to share our new project with you. Stay tuned for more! - V.
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The Dry: an intro to outback noir (archive)
While Melanie and I cook up something extra special for you, we're highlighting some past episodes that you might have missed. THE DRY is an Outback Noir that we studied back in season 9. We talk about the environment as an antagonist, character archetypes, and a whole lot more. Check it out! - V.
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Whiplash: why the villain has a point (archive)
Behind the scenes, Melanie and I are cooking up something very special for you! While we work on that, for the next few weeks we'll be replaying some of our best episodes for you. This week it's WHIPLASH. This is one of my all-time favourites because it's an excellent example of every story principle (seriously). Enjoy! -V.
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What Went Right: paddington
What makes the Paddington franchise so popular with audiences? That's exactly what Melanie and I set out to discover as we take a deep dive into the first film in the trilogy in this brand new What Went Right episode. We look past the CGI and get straight to the heart of the story. -V.
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What Went Wrong: green lantern
It's our second "what went wrong" episode and this time we're taking a deep dive into the 2011 film, GREEN LANTERN. Even Ryan Reynolds says this one is a dud, so where did the storytelling go wrong? Tune in to find out! -V.
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<...Our Best Advice: tension + 4SQ
That's a wrap on Season 13! Over the past eight episodes Melanie took a deep dive into one of the most important concepts in storytelling: tension. In this episode, she reviews the concepts of high and low tension, and highlights the principles you can use to create tension in your story. Meanwhile, I spent the season studying The 4 Story Questions. This is really important stuff. Trust me on this...if you can't answer these questions clearly and succinctly, your story might be in big trouble. -V.
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Sleepless in Seattle: relies on star power?
Valerie and I take a scalpel to some well loved movies this season. First there was the Nightmare Before Christmas and now Sleepless in Seattle. Iâm not a believer in âmagic loveâ so I find the premise of the movie silly, but there are some good examples of tension. However, under the microscope of Valerieâs 4 Story Questions, this movie is lacking in some fundamental storytelling scaffolding. Without clear wants there isnât anything meaningful at stake. The take away - the story could be better. There, I said it. I am the Scrooge of Valentineâs Day. -M
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Gifted: nowhere to hide
Writers of quiet, character-driven or "literary" stories often ask me if all this story theory stuff applies to them, or if it's only for "commercial" fiction. Believe me when I say that it's even more important and in this episode of the podcast, I explain why. Meanwhile, Melanie conducted an experiment this week. She wanted to discover how knowing the ending impacted the tension of a story. Does it kill the tension or enhance it? What she learned may surprise you. -V.
"Our jobs, when we're writing a novel, is to grab our readers' attention early, as...
The Secret of Roan Inish: sweet but weak
Frustration follows flaws! Can you create tension and conflict if the 4 Story questions havenât been answered? The simple answer is ânoâ. I desperately wanted to love this movie because Iâm writing a short story based on selkies. This is a sweet movie. It lacks some storytelling basics, which results in minimal tension and conflict. I know Iâve said it before, but learning from stories that donât work is more valuable when you're learning to write. -M
"Conflict relies on tension to make readers want to know what happens." Janice Hardy
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Judy: why object of desire is essential
Melanie and I talk about Object of Desire all the time and boy, oh boy, this movie really drives home why it's so important. The writers didn't go for the obvious choice here and it makes the movie, and the protagonist, so much more interesting because what Judy wants more than anything in the world is not to perform, but to be with her kids. In terms of tension, it's hit-and-miss. Tune in to find out how you can emulate the tension-creating techniques and how you can avoid the pitfalls. -V.
"It's the conflict that creates tension...
Crazy Stupid Love: passive tension?
I love it when Valerie and I study different theories and come to different conclusions about the movie. Crazy, Stupid, Love has great examples of slow/low tension and high/intense tension - itâs a great movie demonstrating how tension works. However, it doesnât work so well when the 4 Story Questions are applied. Why? Because a multi-point-of-view story needs answers for all POV characters! Which POVs work and which donâtâŚdive into this episode and find out. -M
"Having your characters make stupid decisions is a great way to increase tension." -Melanie Hill
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Fatal Attraction: who's the villain? (archive)
In this archive episode, we revisit our study of FATAL ATTRACTION which first aired as episode 5 of season 7. I was studying character revelation and Melanie was studying worldbuilding, but what I find most fascinating about this movie is that, viewed through a modern lens, it's unclear who the antagonist really is. We'll be back next week with a brand new episode, until then, Happy New Year! -V.
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10 Things I Hate About You: what not to do (archive)
While I'm teaching my kids to surf during our summer beach holiday, and Valerie is shovelling out from a winter storm, we're bringing you a throwback episode from season 6 where we studied stakes and empathy. Based on Shakespeare's "The Taming of the Shrew", "10 Things I Hate About You" is packed with lessons about what not to do. We'll be back with a brand new episode on January 8. Until then, Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays story nerds! - M.
"Stakes equals object of desire plus consequences." Melanie Hill
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The Nightmare Before Christmas: razzle dazzle
The Nightmare Before Christmas is a favourite with both our families, and given that this is a Tim Burton film we expected that the storytelling would be rock solid. This is a great example of writers using the storytelling tools at their disposal to maximum effect. Ah, but since filmmakers have access to different tools than novelists, when you strip away the "spectacle" of stop-motion and musical numbers, how strong is the story itself? The answer may surprise you.
This is our last new episode before the holiday season. For the next two weeks we've selected two...
The Banshees of Inisherin: when the mc breaks bad
The tension starts with the title of this weekâs movie - The Banshees of Inisherin. Banshees cry right before someone dies. Thatâs tension right there - who will it be? The anticipation about who is going to die is high because the outcome is unknown. Tension thrives with uncertainty. I also explore the idea of high and low tension in a story. Valerie is powering on with her study of the 4 Story Questions and showing why they are so important.Â
If you donât want to waste years writing in circles, this episode will help you hol...
Calendar Girls: wait...it's over?
Welcome to a brand new season! This time around I'm studying the 4 Story Questions and Melanie is focused on tension. This week we're looking at CALENDAR GIRLS. We love these actresses (I mean, honestly, what's not to love?) but the storyline threw us for a loop because when it felt like it was coming to a natural conclusion, we realized there was still another hour to go. What happened? And was that a good thing or not? Tune in to find out! -V.
"Making a sale or getting an agent hinges on your ability to describe your...
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What Went Wrong: the cold light of day
We're trying something new this week! Writers are constantly asking me and Melanie to explain why a story seems weird to them. So to help you understand why some stories flop, at the end of each season we'll pick a film that doesn't work and we'll try to figure out why. In this inaugural episode, Melanie chose IN THE COLD LIGHT OF DAY because it got a whopping 4% on Rotten Tomatoes. It's an eye-opener, that's for sure! I'd love to hear if you agree, or disagree, with our assessment. -V.
"This movie failed because it didn't follow...
Our Best Advice: writing exposition and creating character arcs
It's that time again! We've reached the end of the season and that means Melanie and I are wrapping up all our a-ha moments and lessons learned about writing exposition and creating character arcs. Plus we've got a special surprise coming for you and we talk about it in this episode to be sure to listen all the way to the end! - V.
"The closer a scene and its exposition are to real life, the easier it is to make it invisible." - Melanie Hill
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Up in the Air: thiiiiin
Up In The Air, boring or not, is this weekâs question. Why do I find this movie interesting, and why does Valerie find it boring? Could the answer lie in Ryan Bingamâs character arc (and does he have one)? Could it lie in the small amount of exposition? Or could it be that George Clooney movies are boring? One thing is certain: this episode is the opposite of boring. -M
"Is this story interesting, entertaining and worthwhile if the protagonist doesn't have an internal worldview shift?" -Melanie Hill
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All the President's Men: masterful exposition
This movie is almost entirely exposition, and while this isn't an approach I'd recommend for novelists, I can't imagine telling this particular story any other way. You might say that ALL THE PRESIDENT'S MEN is the exception that proves the rule. Master storyteller, William Goldman, pulls it off and that means there's a whole lot we can learn about how and when to use exposition when writing a story. When it comes to character arcs (Melanie's topic this season), neither of the protagonists change in this story but they change the world around them and what that reveals about...
Gone Baby Gone: writing a static protagonist
Most stories are about change. However, there is also a place for stories when the protagonist doesnât change. The outcomes can still be positive - just watch James Bond and Erin Brockovich! There are also stories where the protagonist doesnât change, and the outcome is ambiguous. This movie combines an ethical dilemma with a constant character to create a haunting outcome. The movie also has buckets of exposition. Is this a case of too much is way too much? Never fear, Valerie groups and summarises all the exposition into four key types. -M.
"Patrick's constant chara...
Little Miss Sunshine: who's the protagonist?
As Melanie and I prepared for this episode one question kept coming up ... Who is the protagonist? Melanie argues that the entire family is the protagonist, but I think that Olive (who is the Little Miss Sunshine contestant) is the protagonist. It's an interesting question and our discussion about it is even more interesting. If you're writing a multi-POV story, be sure to check out this episode! -V.
"Exposition is all about the facts that we need to convey to the reader so that they can follow a story without getting confused." Valerie Francis
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Far From Heaven: what your character doesn't want
This season, I am focused on stories with negative or neutral character arcs. Sometimes, finding out what a character doesnât want is the first step to discovery. On the surface, Cathy Whitaker has a perfect life. However, itâs a shallow life. Cathyâs choices are symbolically represented by her husband, Frank, and her gardener, Raymond. The two male characters are interesting external representations of Cathyâs internal choices. Thereâs a small amount of exposition in Far From Heaven, but when it features, itâs done straightforwardly and with simplicity. -M
âThe interesting events in Cathyâs arc ha...
I, Tonya: don't try this at home
Wowzers! I, TONYA is absolutely chock-full of exposition. It's a documentary-style film so at first blush it doesn't seem to offer up many story lessons for novelists. However, DAISY JONES & THE SIX is a documentary-style novel so this is an episode you might want to pay attention to â not just for their handling of exposition, but also for their portrayal of the character of Tonya Harding. -V.
"Introducing characters can only be done via exposition." -Valerie Francis
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Dorian Gray: what mick jagger said
The Rolling Stoneâs song âYou Canât Always Get What You Want,â is my earworm this season. This week, I started to pick apart how wants, needs and arcs are connected. Dorian Gray is a classic cautionary tale about selling your soul. Dorian arrives in London as a beautiful but naive young man and dies with a rotten and decrepit soul - he is unredeemable. Dorian gets what he wants, but he doesnât get what he needs because there are no consequences for his actions. Understanding how wants, needs and character arcs is an essential story tool. Good expos...
The Social Network: pacing, pacing, pacing
It's a brand new season and this time Melanie is studying character arcs through 5 key questions: Where do the characters start, where do they finish, what do they want, what decisions do they make along the way that get them to the end, and do they get what they want or need?
Meanwhile, I do a deep dive into exposition. You've heard about "show, don't tell" right? Well, that's not always true. Sometimes telling your reader information through exposition is exactly the thing you need to do. -V.
"When exposition is done properly, you as...
Best Advice: Narrative Drive + Conflict Triangles
Whoa. This season has been a heavy season. Narrative Drive and Conflict Triangles are two major concepts that can - and will - transform your writing. In this episode, Melanie and I summarize everything we learned this season. -V
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