Writing Break
Writing Break is an ad-free, award-winning podcast for writers. Take a break with America’s Editor and learn her best writing tips, catch up on the latest publishing industry news, and recharge with a fellow book lover who understands the plight of the writer.
Querying Literary Agents, Part 2: Where the Lit Agents Are and How to Find Yours

Today we’re (finally!) continuing our four-part series on querying literary agents. Whether you're writing fiction or nonfiction, querying without doing your homework is like picking a random person off a dock and asking them to captain your boat across the ocean. In this episode, I'm sharing how to research literary agents and find the ones most likely to say yes to your book.
I walk you through:
tools and databases to help you find agents;how to vet an agent’s interests, history, and red flags;an analog method for agent discovery that still hold up...Querying Literary Agents, Part 1: Big Five Dreams or Indie Vibes?

Welcome to the first installment of a four-part series on querying literary agents. In this episode, we explore the pros and cons of publishing with a Big Five publisher versus an independent press. Whether you're writing fiction or nonfiction, traditionally publishing or submitting directly to publishers, this episode will help you clarify your publishing goals.
Plus: A roundup of the latest publishing news, including the growing backlash against tech giants using books to train AI.
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The Big Five publishers: what they offer and what you give up.Independent presses: creat...You Like Writing Tips? We Got Writing Tips (Clip Show #12)

It’s time for a heavy dose of writing wisdom, clipped and curated from recent episodes. Whether you’re plotting, editing, procrastinating or just looking for a creative nudge, this episode’s packed with the good stuff: smart takes, helpful reminders, and maybe a little tough love.
Missed a few episodes? I’ve got you covered.
Featuring:
✍️ First-draft and second-draft writing advice
✍️ Actionable writing tips from bestselling authors
✍️ The reality of traditional publishing
✍️ Plus more gems you might’ve forgotten (or ignored😉)
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High-Concept vs. Low-Concept Stories

Is your story high-concept or low-concept? Understanding this difference can help you refine your pitch, strengthen your storytelling, and position your book effectively in the publishing industry.
🎙️ In this episode, we’ll cover:
✍️ what makes a story high-concept;
✏️ what defines a low-concept story;
✍️ how to tell which one you’re writing and why it matters; and
✏️ examples from books and films to illustrate both concepts.
As always, I’ll share the latest publishing industry news, including trends, controversies, and shifts that could impact authors.
7 Literary Conflicts Explained (Clip Show #11...Navigating the Shifting Publishing Landscape

The publishing world is shifting fast, and as writers, we need to keep up. In this episode, I dive into some of the biggest changes happening in the industry right now, from how AI is reshaping publishing to restrictions that could impact book accessibility. Whether you’re a seasoned writer or just starting out, understanding these changes will help you navigate publishing smarter.
I also share a piece of writing advice I give to authors that I’m now following myself as I write my first book-length work.
Eight Independent Publishers Form Cooperative to Share Resources, Cut C...The Reality of Traditional Publishing, a Cautionary Tale

We all dream of making it big with our writing, but what happens when that dream doesn’t unfold the way you expect? We’ll talk about how that dream didn’t quite come true for one author. Tune in for a behind-the-scenes look at the publishing industry and for the latest publishing news.
The debate over blurbs in publishing, explained | Vox‘It’s quite galling’: children’s authors frustrated by rise in celebrity-penned titles | Children and teenagers | The GuardianNew RomanceCosy KinkThe acquisition of Text Publishing by Penguin Random House is part of a worrying trend in Australian publishingFree...Inspiration vs. Perspiration: Writing, Scams, and Creative Freedom

In this episode, we bring you the latest publishing news along with a discussion on finding a balance between inspiration and hard work. I'll let you know where to access tax tips for authors and where to view sessions that took place during the Winter 2024 Book & Author Festival. I also tell you about a literary agent scam preying on authors. Plus, we discuss a significant legal victory protecting creative freedom and highlight resources for creators impacted by the Los Angeles fires.
In the second half, we explore the concept of the muse—what it means to create sp...
Chuck Palahniuk’s Controversial Writing Advice: Ditching Thought Verbs

In this episode, we take a look at writing advice from Chuck Palahniuk. Can his approach to storytelling help you craft more immersive scenes, or is it too restrictive for your taste?
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Forget Notebooks: 5 Meaningful Gifts Writers Actually Need (Encore)

Looking for the perfect gift for the writer in your life? Forget notebooks and pens—this episode reveals five priceless gifts that every writer needs. Best of all, they’re completely free! Whether you’re a writer yourself or supporting one, these gifts can make all the difference. Tune in for a fun and insightful holiday episode that celebrates writers and their craft.
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9 Actionable Writing Tips from Bestselling Authors

Publishing slows down significantly at the end of each year. So, don’t fret if your query letters remain unanswered this month. Today, we’re exploring 9 practical, actionable writing tips approved by bestselling authors.
As the year winds down, it’s the perfect time to sharpen your writing craft. In this episode of Writing Break, we explore nine practical, actionable writing tips from bestselling authors. From crafting clearer sentences to developing compelling characters and keeping readers hooked, these timeless lessons will help you refine your writing and storytelling.
Get ready to take notes! Great writing starts...
Second Draft Survival Guide: 8 Essential Steps for a Better Draft

Your first draft is done! Now what? In this episode of Writing Break, we break down eight essential steps for revising your manuscript, regardless of genre. Whether you're on your second or sixth draft, this guide will help you refine your work into a polished, compelling manuscript.
We also cover major publishing industry updates, including HarperCollins’ AI licensing deal and social media shifts in the publishing world. Plus, details on the Faber Action! Prize for children’s action-adventure books.
Bluesky Hits 20 Million Users as People Flee TwitterHarperCollins AI Licensing Deal - The Authors GuildFaber launches Action! Priz...First Draft Survival Guide: Writing Tips to Get the Words Flowing

There is a lot of writing advice out there, but remember that not every piece of writing advice is first-draft writing advice. This episode of Writing Break is all about writing your first draft. Learn how to silence your inner editor, embrace the messy process, and focus on getting the story down before worrying about perfection.
We’ll cover why momentum matters, how to keep moving forward when you get stuck, and why your first draft should be a creative free-for-all. Plus, a quick look at recent publishing trends, including why some YA authors are shifting to ad...
The Power of Saying No: How to Prioritize Your Writing

National Novel Writing Month begins next week, which is why today’s episode is a pep talk of sorts. In this episode of Writing Break, we discuss how turning down distractions can help you prioritize your writing and make real progress on your novel.
We also highlight publishing houses currently accepting unsolicited manuscripts, plus a look at Taylor Swift’s latest self-publishing venture.
If you’ve been struggling to find time to write, this episode is for you. Let’s talk about why your book deserves to be a priority and how you can make it happe...
7 Literary Conflicts Explained (Clip Show #11)

This season we’ve been covering seven types of literary conflicts, and I thought it might be useful for you to have a bonus episode that has all seven conflicts back to back.
Let’s settle in at the Writing Break cafe and get started on a full episode of writing tips.
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Character vs Destiny

Today we are wrapping up our seven-part series on literary conflicts with the final boss: Character vs Destiny.
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Character vs Technology

As I record this, a hurricane is sideswiping my city, so if the power stays on, we’ll continue our literary conflict series and discuss, aptly enough, Character versus Technology. We’re also catching up on the Internet Archive court case.
OpenAI looks to shift away from nonprofit roots and convert itself to for-profit companyUpdate: How to Tell Internet Archive to Remove Your Books - The Authors GuildAuthors Guild Applauds Final Court Decision Affirming Internet Archive's Book Scanning as Copyright Infringement - The Authors GuildFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks
Character vs Supernatural

The Writing Break cafe is open, so let’s gather on the Overthinking Couch to discuss the literary conflict of Character vs Supernatural.
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Character vs Society

Welcome back. After last week’s discussion about character vs nature, I hope you managed to work some weather into your current work in progress. In this episode we’re discussing character vs society. The Writing Break cafe is open, so let’s grab a drink and settle into the Overthinking Couch.
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Character vs Nature

We’re discussing publishing news today, including what’s trending in books. We’re also talking about the fascinating literary conflict of character versus nature.
Generative AI reduces the collective diversity of novel contentReport Finds Customer Traffic Rising at Barnes & NobleShelf Awareness for Friday, July 12, 2024 | Shelf AwarenessK-lytics Historical Fiction Market ReportK-lytics Sports Romance ReportFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks
Character vs Character

The literary conflict of character versus character seems simple enough, right? Two characters are pitted against each other in some way. This clash can be physical or mental, but it’s best when it’s a bit of both . . . or a lot of both.
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Character vs Self

Today we are talking about the literary conflict known as character versus self.
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7 Types of Conflict in Literature

Whether or not you seek to avoid conflict in real life, avoiding conflict in your writing will make for a boring book.
For the first half of this season we are covering conflict as a literary device and taking a close look at the seven different types. I’ll offer examples, I’ll discuss how conflict should guide your story, and I’ll explain how more than of these conflicts can be at play within your manuscript.
Has the DEI Backlash Come for Publishing? - The AtlanticWSJ | Kindle is the new must-have accessory (again)Free Style Sheet T...How I Beat Back Imposter Syndrome

I discuss the new format for the show moving forward and how I talk myself out of having imposter syndrome.
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Straightforward Writing Tips (Clip Show #10)

Thank you to everyone who filled out the Listener Feedback Survey. I am in the process of reviewing and revising the show’s format accordingly, but there is still a little bit of time to complete our survey and tell me what to do. Check the show notes for a link to the survey, and remember that all responses are anonymous and highly appreciated. For now, it’s review time again.
Writing Break Listener Feedback Survey - Please complete this survey.The Art of the Mini Sales Pitch: How to Subtitle Your Book So People Will Read It ‹ Litera...How to Write Better Than AI (Finale)

Today we are wrapping up our series on how to write better than AI and insisting on our cup of stars. Please remember to fill out the Writing Break survey. The feedback we're receiving is changing the format of the show. Thank you!
Association of American Literary Agents - Association of American Literary AgentsK-lytics Fantasy Romance Report and Market Seminar VideoWarner Music Loses Appeal In Supreme Court Case Over Copyright InfringementSights and Insights from the 2024 U.S. Book ShowFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
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How to Write Better Than AI (Part 3 )

We have a Listener Feedback Survey for you today in addition to our usual publishing news and writing tips. We appreciate you taking a minute to complete the survey.
Writing Break Listener Feedback Survey - Please complete this survey.Bloomberg - Are you a robot?Farshore Annual ReviewJudge a Book by its Edges | Barnes & NobleHow to get kids to read for fun: People who work on middle-grade books have some ideas.Yes, People Do Buy BooksPEN America Cancels 2024 World Voices FestivalReaders Take Denver 2025 conference canceled after "Fyre Festival of books"Authors Guild Supports FTC's Proposed Ban on Non-Compete...How to Write Better Than AI (Part 2)

It’s break time, writers. We have a lot of publishing news to get through today, and we’re continuing with our four-part series on how to write better than AI.
10 Things Author-Publishers Should Know About Amazon AdvantageAI book publishing platform Spines raises $6.5M to disrupt centuries-old industry - SiliconANGLEFake AI law firms are sending fake DMCA threats to generate fake SEO gains | Ars TechnicaThe Bookseller - News - Trade debates shift towards shorter books for childrenHow One Author Pushed the Limits of AI Copyright | WIREDPEN America Cancels 2024 Literary Awards CeremonyFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusi...
How to Write Better Than AI (Part 1 )

Since the release of ChatGPT, the number of freelance writing jobs is shrinking. Can writers even compete? I hope so, which is why today we are beginning a four-part series that will highlight several writing techniques that elevate any work, be it fiction or nonfiction. Let’s see how many of them you already incorporate into your work.
The Forgotten Painting: A Historical Mystery Novella (The Jack Rogan Mysteries) by Gabriel Farago - Featured AuthorUnderground Bookstore, Carrollton, GA - Featured BookstoreThe jobs being replaced by AI - an analysis of 5M freelancing jobs - bloomberryThe Boom in Middle Gr...Innovations in Publishing and Selecting a Subtitle

Today we are looking at innovations in book publishing and discussing subtitles. The Writing Break cafe is open, and we have a lot of publishing news to get through today, so let’s grab a drink and a snack before settling in at our usual table.
The Art of the Mini Sales Pitch: How to Subtitle Your Book So People Will Read It ‹ Literary HubThe Art of the Mini Sales Pitch: How to Subtitle Your Book So People Will Read It ‹ Literary HubRomantasy, AI and Palestinian voices: publishing trends emerge at London book fair | London book fair | The Guardi...Dramatic Irony in First-Person POV

As an editor, my authors’ late-night, semi-coherent correspondence, choppy first drafts, and deepest darkest secrets die with me. However, today I am sharing an email exchange between an author and myself, with the author’s permission, of course.
The Touch of Her Voice by Sara Scott - Featured AuthorBlush Bookstore, Wichita, Kansas - Featured BookstoreWhy romance novels are having a moment - MarketplaceFrom Boston to Chicago, romance bookstores are popping upSexily ever after: how romance bookstores took over America | Romance books | The GuardianTor Books Criticized for Use of AI-Generated Art in 'Gothikana' Cover DesignThin Margins: The Paper Shortage and...Writing Advice from Neil Gaiman

In this episode, we are discussing book awards, book marketing, and the bit of writing advice Neil Gaiman gave out this week.
Science fiction authors were excluded from awards for fear of offending ChinaAuthor J.D Barker Apologizes, Dropped by Agent After 'Creepy' BookTok RequestGUNGNIR: tales for the dreamers & thinkersBook Sales in FranceNational Book Awards Expand Eligibility to Non–U.S. CitizensPulitzer Prize Rules Expanded EligibilityAkutagawa Prize winner credits ChatGPT for 5% of 'Sympathy Tower Tokyo' | Daily SabahFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
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Writing and Publishing Tips (Clip Show #9)

Tune in for wall-to-wall writing and publishing tips for authors.
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Writing a Good First Line

In the last episode we discussed what makes a good opening line in fiction, and in this episode we’re doing the same with nonfiction, some of which overlaps with fiction. I also share some examples of good opening lines from nonfiction.
Fit for the Throne: The Trial of Ten Kindle Edition by S. McPherson - Featured AuthorLost Books, Montrose, CA - Featured BookstoreBig Five Domination of Adult Bestseller Lists Slipped in 2023In Major Win, Appeals Court Upholds Block on Texas Book Rating LawFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
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3 Questions to Ask About Your Opening Line

This week we begin a two-part series on writing memorable opening lines. Today we’re discussing fiction, and in the next episode we’ll be covering nonfiction.
Hay Festival Cartagena 2024Ábaco, Cartagena, Colombia - Featured BookstorePublic Domain Day 2024 | Duke University School of LawJudge Blocks Key Provisions of Iowa Book Banning LawThe New York Times Complaint Against Microsoft and Open AIFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
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Authors Behaving Badly

This final episode for 2023 is a short one but a juicy one. We are looking at corporations behaving badly, authors behaving badly, and readers behaving well. Because we know readers can do no wrong.
Cait Corrain Goodreads Controversy ExplainedAuthor Apologizes After Review Bombing Books on Goodreads | TIMEThe Bookseller - News - Tolkien estate wins two lawsuits against author of unauthorised Lord of the Rings sequelTikTok's #BookTok trend 'literally changed my life'Five years and 2m copies later, self-published author lands UK book deal | Crime fiction | The GuardianMeta Used Copyrighted Books AI Training Despite Warning from LawyersFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree...New Book Trends on Amazon

In this holiday episode I share new book trends on Amazon, new publishing awards, and the latest publishing news.
First Year in Estonia Kindle Edition by Pynchon Woo - Featured AuthorRüütel & Matilda, Tallinn, Estonia - Featured BookstoreThe Paranormal Romance eBook MarketThe Fantasy Romance Book MarketScreen Door Press - The University Press of KentuckyThe Yale Review | The Yale Nonfiction Book PrizePenguin Random House, Authors Sue to Block Iowa Anti-LGBTQ Book Banning LawJulian Sancton v. OpenAI IncFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
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Examples of Foreshadowing

We are continuing our foreshadowing discussion today, and I might say something about genres that you will not like.
Depot Café and Bookstore, Mill Valley, CA - Featured BookstoreSalt by Liz Shipton (Adult Version) - Featured AuthorSalt Paperback (YA Edition) - Featured Author57 Writing Contests in DecemberWorkers at Two More B&N Stores Vote to UnionizeCircana BookScan: US Print Book Market 'Slowing a Bit'Free Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
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Foreshadowing Takes Finesse

We are beginning our discussion on foreshadowing today, in both fiction and nonfiction.
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"Calm and Cozy: Lo-fi Vibes" by The Turquoise Moon
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Query Letters vs Book Proposals

Happy Halloween. In this episode, we’re talking about book proposals, how much writers make, and other such spooky things.
The Ghost of Lilly Pilly Creek by Abbie L. Martin - Featured AuthorHutchinson Public Library, Hutchinson, Kansas - Featured LibraryStart Here: How to Write a Book Proposal + Book Proposal Template | Jane FriedmanWriting Books Remains a Tough Way to Make a LivingNEA Survey Finds Decline in Adult ReadingThe Bookseller - News - HarperFiction launches crime imprint Hemlock PressAuthors sue Meta, Microsoft, Bloomberg in latest AI copyright clash | ReutersFree Style Sheet TemplatesFree Writing TipsMusic licensed from Storyblocks:
...Publishing Tips for Authors (Clip Show #8)

Let's review some of this season's publishing tips.
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